Wednesday 31 August 2016
Tuesday 30 August 2016
My Narrative writing
The magic roundabout?
Once in 1002 there was two girls that was named allie killy and they were best friends they both lived at bates street allie was 9 and killy was 10 killys birthday was on the 11 of february and allis birthday was on the 10 of february they were kind of like sisters cause they always played with each other every day.
On a sunny day after school they were so,so,so,so baord that the went to go and have a swim when they were finished they went to play hand ball they played all the games they can think about . So killys mum said go and take a walk and get some fresh air so tomorrow yous can do the garden and they agreed so they took a walk along smith,bates and hanoa.When they were taking a walk some people was following them and they had black masces on they could they could not see their faces the girls went to the daire and the mans were there outside when they walked out of the shop they put black bags over the girls faces .
They got put in the dungeon and got locked up they did not know what to do they were crying and screaming and hugging each other. They were so cold there hand could not move at all and they were so scared.Im staving said allie can you get us something to eat no said the rober .
Then they kept screaming into someone saved them . killys brother herd them and broke them free the robbers seen them and ran after them they ran and ran and ran until they came past a funny looking pathway and ran through it and hopped on it and they spun round and round and round until something magical happened. Then they happened to be where a lot of talking ponies were hi this is ponyville and we are in a secret roundabout was that what bring us here said max yes said the talking pony well we can have a look said allie but after that take us home said the girls.
The lesson I learnt was don't walk around the street without a parent all this would happen to you.
Tuesday 23 August 2016
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